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The Eloquent Peasant

Also called The Tale of the Peasant and the Workman; The Tale of the Eloquent Peasant; he Plea of the Eloquent Peasant
Story, c.1875 BCE
approx. 5,000 words in English translation
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First line

There was once a man whose name was Khunanup.

trans. Tobin

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they said that he was of all the world's kings
the gentlest of men, and the most gracious,
the kindest to his people, the keenest for fame.

trans. Tobin

he who breathes calmly makes people pant

trans. Parkinson

Only the goodness of the good man is good beyond him.

trans. Parkinson

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We haven't much of a clue who this writer was. Truth be known, we're not even sure when he wrote. (Though it likely was a "he", or a collective "he".) "The Eloquent.... more

The Eloquent Peasant


Something new four thousand years ago

Only three fictional works from ancient Egypt remain in nearly full condition and they are all very different.

"The Shipwrecked Sailor" is an adventure and fable. "The Tale of Sinuhe" is an early patriotic epic. "The Eloquent Peasant", from about the same time as "Sinuhe", is something else again—like a cross between a folk tale and the bulk of Egyptian non-fictional writing which is more meditative.

The narrative framework of "The Eloquent Peasant" has to do with a peasant who is cheated out of his possessions. The peasant takes his complaint to the chief steward, presenting his case quite eloquently. The steward reports the plea to the pharaoh (king) who is intrigued. The pharaoh asks the steward to ignore the peasant, requiring him to keep returning and making more of these wonderful pleas. The peasant returns eight more times, each time imploring the rulers to adhere to Ma'at, an Egyptian concept variously translated as righteousness, order, justice or truth—but not just in legalistic terms, rather as features of the universe. Each time he attacks the matter in a different way, delving deeper into the implications of this abstract concept.

These parts of the story are usually translated into poetry. You may take them as precursors to the Greek dialogues, or to the moral sermons of the Bible: one passage, for instance, is rendered "Do for one who may do for you, that you may cause him thus to do", nearly two millennia before Christ is reported to have delivered the Golden Rule.

In the end, the peasant gets justice and we see Ma'at restored from the top to the bottom of society.

The story seems to work on several levels. It piques the interest of the common folks, showing someone at the lower-level of society who is able to use his golden tongue to outwit those who oppress him, while also demonstrating the wisdom of the king who recognizes the truth when he hears it. At the same time, we're quite aware that it's unlikely an ignorant peasant would have such a grasp of religious and philosophical principles, or of the language of such discourse. The monologues are really pitched to the educated classes, directing them to strive for the wise rule that would maintain the stability of their society and balance in the universe.

Something like that. I don't know enough about Egyptian society to understand the context completely. But I have been surprised to find the ruminations of the peasant interesting. The first reaction may be of disappointment—hey, where'd the narrative go? this is just speeches now? But once you accept this, you may see how profound this material must have been for the ancient Egyptians and for those who came after.

Two collections of ancient Egyptian works that include "The Eloquent Peasant" are The Tale of Sinuhe and Other Egyptian Poems, translated by R.B. Parkinson, and The Literature of Ancient Egypt, edited by William Kelly Simpson but with this story translated by Vincent A. Tobin. Parkinson's translation is the seminal translation that scholars seem to depend upon. Tobin's builds upon Parkinson's and is the easiest to read and understand in my experience. There are also several versions available for reading online but I find them too crude to get across the meaning of the peasant's monologues in any way that would impress a modern reader. Some of them also compress the story, leaving out most of the poetic speeches which are the heart of "The Eloquent Peasant".

— Eric McMillan




See also:

The Tale of Sinuhe

The Shipwrecked Sailor

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The Literature of Ancient Egypt

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